mary june brown

I am working on a novel and am seeking feedback on the “voice” or “tenor” of the book. I have essentially written the same material in two different treatments and would like input. If you are interested and willing to give me about 30 minutes of your time, please contact me: maryjunebrown@hotmail.com

Thank you!

Have looked, not found

Googley, yahooie

Your name in quotes bears

Nothing, nothing.

Eleven years swim like eels

Various directions

A flash of silver there

A sprite of orange here

You’ve taken shelter somewhere

In the desert, a movie not playing

I can’t know where it’s playing

Ghosts and eels colliding
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someone–not the love of your

Life

has you more than I have

You.

What?

What does that make me?

I’m without. No power.

No. No, not anything.

Nothing at all.

That is all.

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